Rough Draft

Yea, it was one of those things that I had to do. Ever get so caught up in a thought that you stop what you're doing and take notes? Then, when you try to write it the next day, it really doesn't come together like you had planned?

Seems as though that's what happened with my previous story. I think I'll still try to tweek it, but the transition between subjects is the issue. I need to tie everything together better. The only trouble is that I'm not very good at writing fiction. I have a hard time with tense and details, consquently it begins to sound like an overly dramatic poem. *sigh*

Oh, and Zach was kind enough to send me the photo I was thinking of when we went to Stanley hot springs. Hmm, I'm a good "sporting" liar though. Look at that "massive CEDAR!" Hahahahaa! At least I got the snowfall right.